I’m sorry. I’m very sorry.
Even though I usually use posts for talking about my novella, this time I want to write an apology to you, readers. Why - you’re probably thinking - do I want to apologise? Because I eliminated Don. I did. I regret it. I don’t regret it. I don’t know. There were a few options buzzing in my mind about how to continue the story and how to evolve the part of Don. I largely talked about him in a previous post as a champion of friendship, love, sincere values and honesty. And, at the end, I sacrificed him. Don could have been a useful, active help for the police; he would have teamed up with James and Roger for catching the real culprit. This would have turned the story into a civilian-detective who helps the police. (A plot already seen in numerous works, isn’t?) Don could have escaped from Mark’s basement. (This would have done things more thrilling and appealing, perhaps.) I might have turned Don into a prey for two hunters – on one side Mark, on the other the detectives – that wanted him for their personal tasks. (I have to be honest, this is an exciting idea, actually. Might I use it in the future for another story?) Last, but not least, a romantic plot which would have praised Don as the pure hero of this story: Don kills Mark, and he avenges his beloved Ivonne. (I totally am afraid, lads, but, nope, this is not a fairy tale!) Thinking and thinking again about what to do, I finally thought that Mark had to carry out his insane habit without any troubles. His anonymity and multiple-identity were the priority. So, I thought on a cold and rainy day in front of the window of my room, why shouldn’t I unite our two sweet and nice sincere lovers? Don’s death is a ceremony of Ivonne’s friendship and love; even though they hadn’t planned to end up so badly by the hand of a psychopathic murderer, they, finally, bound them together forever. Don’t you see their souls walking hand in hand towards the endless horizon in the clear and cloudless evening? I do! And I love the idea of imaging them together in a place where their troubled and difficult pasts can’t come back and annoy them again. (Tears and sobs.) After this sensitive moment, let’s get back to our main story. The conclusion of “The fear eater” has come! We know Mark’s real identity; we know he deeply craves to feel others’ fears; we also know that he steals identities. What we don’t know is where James and Roger can find him. They literally have no clue of where he’s living up. The detectives, fortunately, have supposed that the killer may reside close to the park. This is not only an assumption; do not forget that they retrieved Heisemberg notebook which helped them to profile Mark. But…What about Ivonne’s disappeared journal? “Wednesday” is the last chapter and it contains the answers to the entire story. The last part of “The fear eater” is now available on Wattpad. If you want to read it or you are curious about the entire novella, CLICK HERE. See you soon, mates! Take care!
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